I like it. I can see a real improvement with your inking, the hard work is definitely paying off. Dammit! I'm going through my devwatch for the first time in at least a fortnight and everyone is inspiring me so much.
There's nothing wrong with you giving me advice. We're artists right?! We should not be afraid to critique work...(I say we 'cause I'm hesitant to give critiques here on DA, I don't want to insult anybody). I tell you though I wouldn't mind getting a bit more in-depth comments on my work, I need it.